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To you: my enemy,

are you happy?
happy that youve made my life
a living hell.
if looks could kill
i would have died 100 times by now.
but my looks wouldnt kill you.
youd stay alive
just to spite me and laugh in my face.
you think its over?
you think youve won?
the war rages on
a battle of wits and wills.
i see you now
passing by.
the fire of hate burns
in our eyes, our hearts, our souls.
i hope youre happy now...

im about to make your life a living hell.
©2004-2009 ~darkfairy22389
:icondarkfairy22389:

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3rd in the "To You:" series. its basically about everyone that has made my life hell. and after reading through the series in my notebook, i noticed that the titles and poems get "meaner and meaner". 'only one' to 'downfall' to 'enemy' now i have to think of something lower then enemy...

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:icontherimgreaper:
excellent i totally understand
:icongazzafizza06:
I love :+fav:!

You seem to have a thing for the phrase "passing by" and the concept of eyes displaying emotion. I see that in a number of your poems.

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The world is a stage. Much thanks to the casting director!
:spotlight-left::bow::spotlight-right:
:iconacidecks:
I really like this, and your whole 'to you' series (I got round to looking at all the deviants that had gathered over my absence) but this had to be one of my favs. It's the same feeling I get as the adreniline rushes through me right before a fight breaks out. Nice job.
:icondarkfairy22389:
thank you. im glad you like the series. :blush:

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Love like Winter
:icondarkfairy22389:
thanks! :D

and i never noticed the 'passing by' thing. i think you know more about my work then i do! i really should keep an eye out for patterns in my work! :D

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Love like Winter
:iconbillyboy1220:
I have a friend and it almost seems like the "to you:" series could fit her life.... o well I could be mistaken. I think all of them are very good but this one has to be my favorite. awsume job...

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All this pain is an illusion...

Reaching up and reachng out I'm reaching for the random or whatever will bewilder me
:icondarkfairy22389:
thank you. actually, now that i think about it, this seems to be everyones favorite.

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Love like Winter
:iconbillyboy1220:
well most the people who read my so called poems like the more morbid stuff. idn if thats the case with your fans but it may be why they like this one the most.(I think it's why I like it the most)

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All this pain is an illusion...

Reaching up and reachng out I'm reaching for the random or whatever will bewilder me
:icondarkfairy22389:
yea, if that is the reason...the favorite will switch to the final poem of the series...but i cant say anymore about that.

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Love like Winter

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